A
reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. Describe what stood out to you as
important, what feedback surprised you the most, what feedback you think was
outright wrong or silly, what feedback you thought was most useful and
insightful.
From the
comments, people mentioned that I should be more passionate about what I am
trying to sell to potential investors.
What
did you change, based on the feedback?
I
highlighted the impact that music has worldwide and how I truly believe that it
possesses the power to help students destress.
Hi,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your elevator pitch! I think you did a great job explaining your business idea and your passion for it really came across. I can tell that you seem more comfortable with the pitch now, which is probably because we have practiced it a couple times now. I think you applied past comments very well.
Hi Nathan, I really liked your elevator pitch in this assignment. I see it being a big improvement from the last elevator pitch that you had submitted for this class. Your passion and energy for this is clearly shown in this elevator pitch. I like that you tried your best to incorporate the constructive criticism from the last pitch and improve this one.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job with your pitch. I could tell you're comfortable with your idea and are engaged in your audience. It seems like you incorporated your feedback effectively.
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